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Flight or fall by Vector-Brony Flight or fall by Vector-Brony
I've had this comic strip in my mind for a while. To be honest I want to see Scootaloo learn to fly and Sweetie Belle learn to use magic. And to see them all get their cutie marks.
The scripting for this comic was done by :iconlunais20percentcool: and :iconhampshireukbrony:
The comic was grammar checked by :iconlatias7:
A big thank you goes out to these two for all their help.
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Overall this was a very entertaining comic. The panels were well done, but were all exactly the same size.

The pictures within the panels were all very good. The trees look a little stubby but the ponies themselves were almost perfect.

I thought the garden path structure was interesting, but people do it often in comics now (I dunno the everyday term for them, we call them Garden Path Stories in Linguistics because they take you down the garden path, and then cause you to realize that your preconceptions from the beginning of the story were 100% wrong like the movie Inception or Now You See Me, or the clip in American Dad where Roger tells everyone about when he was a race car driver and swerves to avoid a baby, and then says "I was that baby").

Overall it was very good work.
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Lemme be honest here. This is great. Good plot, story line,idea in general. but, the trees are too flat and stubby, the jaws on some of the ponies are pushed forwards more than they should, and the idea of hte ponies movement isnlt so great. what i mean is that one pony is in one spot then its in another. othe than that ith is fantastic! the ponies are okay and the trees need to be fixed. i dont know what else to say about this other than a few tweaks need to be made to the ponies and the setting.
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dragonflyzMC Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MINECRAF
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RebornAnimalz Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
scootaloo can fly and sweetie belle can do magic?!
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Vector-Brony Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well Sweetie belle doing magic is now cannon and Scootaloo has flown before in Cutie pox. 
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JosD Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
and now we can said since Twilight time
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:iconscyphi:
Scyphi Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Twist ending! :P
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thunderbird19 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Because of the 'I am not a chicken!' panels, I think I spy an Undercover Brother reference.  Right? Or not so much? 
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BloodLily16 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why get rid of it when she could put it on the wall behind her bed?
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WolfieHowls112 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna 
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princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
last time I tryed to mine at night I failed so bad! "enderman kills button mash" LOL love the minecraft refrance :) :) :) :)
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Ruyeka-San Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Scoot's can fly now?
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