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Don't mess with Derpy by Vector-Brony Don't mess with Derpy by Vector-Brony
I know that Derpy will never get a main role in the show ever again, but dammit a brony can dream can't he?
Grammar was check by :iconlatias7: Once again many thanks to her helping out. 

I'll be working on Power ponies next. But after that will come the Charge of Equestria in my Shadow fall series
This was made using traces from MLP FIM
Credit goes to :iconhasbroplz: and :iconfyre-flye:
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Hello Vector-Brony,

I have for a long time been a fan of your excellent vectoring skills, and this comic strip certainly dos not fail to impress.

Vision: 5/5
This is very well made and so show-accurate that I think the producers would have difficulty telling the two apart.

I do not want to say that the vectoring is bad, because it certainly is not, but for the speech bubbles, I love how you did them the same colour as the pony who is speaking and also changed the font, but I think that the text could be made a little clearer is not stretched and it would be easier to tell which pony is speaking if you used something like a line or arrow to indicate which pony is speaking.

Originality: 4/5
This is a completely original story, but as there is a TV show about MLP:FiM, I have had to take off one star. I am sorry, but something that has appeared on TV simply cannot be fully original.

But for any who just want a Derpy story, then this'll suit you just fine. ;)

Technique: 4.5/5
Your technique is almost fully flawless, only thing to note is not to stretch or squash the text.

Impact: 4.5/5
This could have an impact on many who like Derpy and want her to have a new headcanon, but however, since I am not a fan of Derpy (but I do not have anything against her) I have taken .5 off.

I hope that you find this review a good summary of this piece of art , thank you for reading.
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IamTheRealSpringTrap Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New Deviant Student Traditional Artist
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk man derpy is evil
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:iconlisaangeloflife:
lisaangeloflife Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
LOL XD
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:icontzryylon5:
Tzryylon5 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Celestia: "Dear Princess Ce-" Huh. That's all it says.
Luna: Perhaps it be a first draft, sent in err?
Celestia: Perhaps...
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:iconnuazka:
nuazka Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ah yes when it's Derpy, everything is acceptable
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Derpy takes her mail duty VERY seriously!
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:iconmissip:
MissIp Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Derpy is the best psychopath
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:icontheponyofone:
ThePonyOfOne Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
i for some reason dont like derpy no more...
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
the REAL Derpy would NEVER do this; that's obviously a changeling (remember back in the comic series?)
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:iconbolt187:
Bolt187 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love it!
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:iconrobokitty:
RoboKitty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Dear Celestia,
Do not fuck with the motherly, menopausal mailmare
Sincerely,
Everyone
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:icondowlphin:
Dowlphin Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And Twiley... remember to let Spike send that letter!
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:iconkomatsuzaki-xingqi:
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was very funny. I laughed for at least 8 seconds. But the real kicker is that I clapped my hands... twiice. Bravo!
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:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, Derpy, you're so silly xD
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:icon0amber0:
0amber0 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student General Artist
When WHAT!!!!:stinkeye: 
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:iconguille832:
GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
I bet she has invited Pinkie to join to the party. There might be cupcakes... muahahaha!
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:iconazreal258:
AZREAL258 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Princess Celestia Derpy's gone crazy send the royal guard.
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:iconeleanorlover101:
eleanorlover101 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg hahaha
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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, nice little idea I didn't expect. :o
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013

:icontwilightwhatplz:

 

Dear Princess Celestia,

 

I am writing to you today about an urgent matter: I THINK DERPY HAS CAPTURED SPECIAL DELIVERY, OUR NEW MAILPONY CARRIER! PLEASE SEND THE ROYAL GUARDS TO INVESTIGATE THIS! WHO KNOWS WHAT SHE'LL DO TO HIM!

 

Princess Twilight Sparkle.

 

Looks like Derpy got tired of waiting for the Postal Union's decision on the matter, and took matters into her own hooves. :XD:

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Scaratyl-Targe-Obsid Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

After what happened here www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZfEki…

Me and most of the ponies that work with the Princesses agree just stay away from Derpy and let things just play out. I guess Twilight forgot this situation when the house landed on her head.

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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013

Yeah. I've seen that before.

 

:icontiatrolledplz: :iconsays3plz: Mother of me!

 

:XD:

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BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Err.... Twilight seems like she can execute the order already without needing Celestia's permission actually.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013

Oh, yeah! I totally forgot about how she ordered those guard ponies in the S4 premier.

 

And she did it LIKE A BAWS! :D

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BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh... of course. :)

If you think Special is the only stallion, try the ones as seen in The Last Roundup & Putting Your Hoof Down.
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Fire5236 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe :D
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:iconelythespidermare:
Elythespidermare Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twi you are a princess now you can get a hole squad or a spy
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013   General Artist
Blame those damn soccermoms for fucking things up.
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
How are soccer mons to blame? :/
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013   General Artist
They complained that she was "offensive" to people with mental handicaps, so they got Hasbro to remove the word "Derpy" and make her look and sound "normal".

Ironically they made it even worse, by saying that being abnormal is bad.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Makes me wonder if they're gonna do the same for Scootaloo because she "offends" physically handicapped kids. *sighs* :(
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013   General Artist
These soccer moms need to be put back in whatever dumpster they came out of.
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:iconperegrinstaraptor:
PeregrinStaraptor Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I think we can blame the soccer-moms for sending Derpy into a state of insanity right now...
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
What do soccer moms have to do with this? :/
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:iconperegrinstaraptor:
PeregrinStaraptor Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
You took what I said seriously? Sigh...if you must...recall back to Season 2's episode of The Last Roundup. Then you'll get why I said it.
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ThePonyOfOne Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
i didn like derpy anyway so i did not care
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:iconperegrinstaraptor:
PeregrinStaraptor Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Everyone is entitled to they're own opinion I suppose.
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:icontheponyofone:
ThePonyOfOne Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Ok
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Kra-ZGirl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I wonder if anypony realized that particular mailpony looks a lot like :iconfyre-flye:'s ponyfid self but only male and a Pegasus 
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Josiah-Shockency-JCS Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
How.........sssssssssss-....scandalous? @~@
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YugiohPonyAvengers Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer

I can imagine the letter Twilight was thinking about would say:

 

"Dear Princess Celestia,

 

Derpy kidnapped Special Delivery and has become the new mail pony. Send in the Royal Guards ASAP!

 

 

Your faithful student,

 

Twilight Sparkle"

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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Err... Twilight is Princess too. She can do that without Celestia's permission.
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YugiohPonyAvengers Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Writer
Oh...
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terezipyrope413 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Dat scrunch
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:iconlegate47:
Legate47 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconguardponyplz::iconsaysplz: Stop! You violated the law. Pay the court a fine or serve your sentence! 

:iconderpy-plz::iconsaysplz: Crap!
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:iconirishshift:
Irishshift Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I'm not who you think I am! X3
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:iconrechadis:
RechaDis Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
what will happen with Special Delivery? 
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:iconatb1996:
ATB1996 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Would I be Derpy's new target when I say that I FORGOT she was a mail-pony? 
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:iconvector-brony:
Vector-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Run!
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:iconatb1996:
ATB1996 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
It's ok I got a bomb shelter where no one would find it! 

(Runs away and completely vanishes) 
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XLUFERX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That explain why he disapear
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