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Don't mess with Derpy by Vector-Brony Don't mess with Derpy by Vector-Brony
I know that Derpy will never get a main role in the show ever again, but dammit a brony can dream can't he?
Grammar was check by :iconlatias7: Once again many thanks to her helping out. 

I'll be working on Power ponies next. But after that will come the Charge of Equestria in my Shadow fall series
This was made using traces from MLP FIM
Credit goes to :iconhasbroplz: and :iconfyre-flye:
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Hello Vector-Brony,

I have for a long time been a fan of your excellent vectoring skills, and this comic strip certainly dos not fail to impress.

Vision: 5/5
This is very well made and so show-accurate that I think the producers would have difficulty telling the two apart.

I do not want to say that the vectoring is bad, because it certainly is not, but for the speech bubbles, I love how you did them the same colour as the pony who is speaking and also changed the font, but I think that the text could be made a little clearer is not stretched and it would be easier to tell which pony is speaking if you used something like a line or arrow to indicate which pony is speaking.

Originality: 4/5
This is a completely original story, but as there is a TV show about MLP:FiM, I have had to take off one star. I am sorry, but something that has appeared on TV simply cannot be fully original.

But for any who just want a Derpy story, then this'll suit you just fine. ;)

Technique: 4.5/5
Your technique is almost fully flawless, only thing to note is not to stretch or squash the text.

Impact: 4.5/5
This could have an impact on many who like Derpy and want her to have a new headcanon, but however, since I am not a fan of Derpy (but I do not have anything against her) I have taken .5 off.

I hope that you find this review a good summary of this piece of art , thank you for reading.
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Tzryylon5 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Celestia: "Dear Princess Ce-" Huh. That's all it says.
Luna: Perhaps it be a first draft, sent in err?
Celestia: Perhaps...
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nuazka Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ah yes when it's Derpy, everything is acceptable
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Centaur71 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Derpy takes her mail duty VERY seriously!
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MissIp Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Derpy is the best psychopath
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ThePonyOfOne Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
i for some reason dont like derpy no more...
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Centaur71 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
the REAL Derpy would NEVER do this; that's obviously a changeling (remember back in the comic series?)
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Bolt187 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love it!
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RoboKitty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Dear Celestia,
Do not fuck with the motherly, menopausal mailmare
Sincerely,
Everyone
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Dowlphin Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And Twiley... remember to let Spike send that letter!
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FlutterBOSS Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was very funny. I laughed for at least 8 seconds. But the real kicker is that I clapped my hands... twiice. Bravo!
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